When will you guess the big twist?

My new psychological thriller, Where the Night Takes Us, begins with the following proviso.

Psychological thrillers with underdogs facing tough odds and dark, daring twists. That’s my jam and peanut butter on sourdough bread. I hope they are your kind of fiction, too. If you like Mindhunter, you’ll love this.

Bonuses:
1. The ebook is deeply discounted for a limited time. (Also available in paperback and hardcover.)
2. You’ll find trenchant and fun conversation starters for your book club in the back.
3. There are lots of twists and turns along the way, but when will you guess the big twist?

Here’s the book blurb:

Thriller cover

Dr. Simon Fethullahโ€™s weapon was his mind. It is also his torment.

As a forensic psychiatrist working with the FBI, Simonโ€™s testimony helped to convict the Rainy Day Cannibal. After taking a bullet for his trouble, Simon retreats to the wilds of Montana to hide and to heal with his loving wife Carla and Stefano, their massive dog. The good doctor seeks peace, but murderers have long memories. When the President’s Press Secretary is assassinated, a serial killerโ€™s dreams become our nightmares.

Though caged, prison walls cannot contain Rainy Dayโ€™s ambitions. The madman has a loyal following and a vendetta that demands a terrible price. When threatening postcards find their way to Simonโ€™s door, itโ€™s clear that dangerous people know how to find him, and they are coming for blood.

The Fear-Death Series features suspenseful thrillers centered on Dr. Simon Fethullah, a complex, haunted character whose love for his wife, Carla, balances him. Simon’s kind of like Dr. Gregory House, but with House hunting serial killers instead of disease. (Also, everybody loves Stefano.)

I’ve been getting lots of lovely feedback on Where the Night Takes Us. Here are a few snippets about the psychological thriller with a big twist:

It is one of those wonderful books where the reader is totally immersed in the story, unaware of their surroundings, going right along beside the characters and almost smelling the fresh brewed coffee in the story. Every part was plausible. It takes the reader through a full range of emotions which a couple of times provoked me to put the book down and digest what Iโ€™d read. This five star book is a good stand alone book but the moment I finished it I was eager for a sequel. Iโ€™m sure it will be five star too!


I got completely lost in the story. I also found myself wiping away tears and, then, a few pages later, laughing out loud at Simon’s dry, sarcastic humor. This is the first of Mr. Chute’s work that I have read, but it won’t be the last. I can’t wait to read the next in this series. I highly recommend it to fans of serial killers and psychological thrillers. 


The plot twists kept me hooked throughout, whilst the suspense built chapter by chapter. Simon is a complex and realistic character, and I liked the dynamic between him and his wife in the narrative. The wild and isolated setting also added to the overall suspenseful feeling of the storyline. If this was on the tv I would have been watching it from behind a cushion!


I enjoyed the idea that the entire story was a journal and the reader was experiencing it after the fact as the character, Simon, had experienced it. Chute knows how to put little details in to have the reader go mad with questions until he finally decides to take pity and explain. Its an excellent tactic and I am here for it!

More News: The sequel is already available!

Murdered girls get headlines. Missing girls get forgotten.

A bullet drove Dr. Simon Fethullah out of the FBI. A grieving motherโ€™s plea to find her missing daughter drags the brilliant forensic psychiatrist from his solitude. The cops blew the case, the trailโ€™s gone cold, and Simonโ€™s still haunted by his wifeโ€™s death. What he uncovers will test his training, his sanity, and the ghosts that refuse to let him go.

With his massive dog and a sharp-tongued driver named Paloma as his unlikely partners, he packs up his RV and heads into the Texas heat. To find the girl, Simonโ€™s search will take him deep into the City of the Dead. When the boundary between reality and delusion blurs, Simon’s mind becomes the most dangerous terrain.


The first review is in from Canada
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The suspense in this story is outstandingly well written. There are lovely shots of humour that provide moments of relief when things get too dark, and, as always, readers can expect unexpected developments.

This is another five-star novel from Robert Chazz Chute.

Cane Corso dog.

Stefano, the Cane Corso doggie says…well, nothing. He’s a dog.
But if he could speak, he’d say these thrillers put movies in your head.

Extra hint: These novels make great gifts! Feel free to buy in bulk. ๐Ÿ™‚

Where are you taking me? Lessons learned.

Where the Night Takes Us is the first book in the Fear-Death Experiences series. It’s a thriller about Dr. Simon Fethullah, a retired FBI profiler stalked by the Rainy Day Cannibal. Rainy Day is in prison, but his reach goes far beyond the bars of his cell.

Early feedback has been great! The beta readers love it!

Note: Where the Night Takes Us is available for pre-order now at this link. The novel launches September 14th! The pre-order price is heavily discounted. And thanks! With a couple of clicks, you help me immensely.

Yesterday, I passed a big milestone on the path to publication.

I completed the manuscript for the sequel: When the Night Finds Us. This mystery/thriller begins with Simon, suffering fallout from the events in Where the Night Takes Us. When a villain runs him off the road, the good doctor is injured but intent on finding new purpose. He buys a big RV, hires a driver, and heads off to Texas with his faithful dog Stefano.

His mission: A girl has gone missing from Defiant, Texas. Find Willy Dupree, dead or alive. As his perception of reality blurs, Simon will have to find his way through the darkness and, maybe, back to the light.

I’m so happy with the story. It has heart and thought, twists and turns. I love all the sassy banter with Simon’s driver, Paloma Garrido, too. There’s action and mystery, but room for plenty of jokes, too. My final draft is off to my editor, the great Gari Strawn. I’m aiming to release this sequel by the end of October.

Thriller cover for the novel When the Night Finds Us


Lessons learned

  1. The previous two novels I’ve published, Vengeance Is Hers and Endemic, are big books. I wrote them that way because the stories I wanted to tell demanded room to move. Vengeance Is Hers, in particular, needed length because the instigating incident occurs when the heroine, Molly, is in high school. After a tragedy, she leaves the only home she’s ever known to try to leave her penchant for vengeance behind her. She grows up a little and tries to make a peaceful life. Her instinct to seek justice in her inimitable way leads her to lose her job in academia. With nowhere else to go, she returns to Poeticule Bay, Maine, after twelve years. When she discovers that the town has changed, but the villains haven’t, she slips back into revenge mode.

    When I discussed the book with literary agents, they had two concerns:

    (A) The age of the protagonist. Is this a young adult story? Is it contemporary women’s fiction? New adult? Molly goes from a teenager to twenty-nine, so what shelf in the bookstore is appropriate?

    (B) The length. At 114,000 words. Was it too long for the usual genre expectations?

    My answers: To point A, Vengeance Is Hers crosses genres. Point B, yeah, maybe so (but so what?)

    If I had to pick one category for VIH, I’d say New Adult, but my primary market is not bookstores. My sales platforms are mostly digital. By not heeding the agents’ cautions, did I hurt my book sales? No. Online sales platforms are search engines. There is no shelf. There is metadata, keywords, descriptions, and the cover. That’s what sells it.

    Besides, the VIH story I wanted to tell required that length. To serve readers best, a better story demanded I write against industry expectations.

    Lessons learned: Not all advice is for everyone all the time. Consider good advice from well-meaning experts. Reject advice when it feels constrictive, dated, or simply not for you. Follow your heart. No regrets.

    BONUS: And take heart! The publishing industry is, in many ways, a complete mess right now. If you’re forging your own path, you’re in great company.

    2. Not fitting into a box is not what hurt the sales of Vengeance Is Hers. I did.

    I focused on the writing, not the marketing. VIH is considered excellent by those few who have read it. However, I was impatient. It had been a long time since I’d published Endemic, and I was concerned I’d been forgotten by my readership. Too eager to hit the button, I basically tossed VIH out there without priming the pump by letting more people know it exists. There are so many books published each day that it’s very easy to disappear in the book marketplace. That’s more and more true each day with the flood of AI slop books.

    Lesson learned: Hope, history, laurels, a few ads, social media posts, and newsletters are insufficient. We must advertise and nurture sales as if the book’s a flightless baby bird in the nest. I write great novels. (Hey, false modesty is false!) But anemic marketing is the equivalent of an opera singer belting out beautiful arias in a soundproof room.

    So what’s next, Rob?

    For Where the Night Takes Us, I’ve engaged BookSirens, Booksprout, and Itsy Bitsy Book Bits to find reviewers. I’ve sent out advance reader copies. I’ve completed fresh research, and there’s yet more to do. I’ve experimented with ads and taken more book marketing seminars. I have someone lined up to help me promote When the Night Finds Us.

    I’ve proven myself great at plotting. Now I have to engage in more planning. Do I enjoy the marketing end of the publishing business? Not really. I didn’t always enjoy selling other people’s books when I was a rep for several publishers. However, I sold millions of dollars’ worth of books to stock bookstores across Toronto and Cottage Country.

    I love writing. I love entertaining readers. It’s unreasonable to expect to enjoy every aspect of your work. To find readers, I have to promote. I can’t hide in the blanket fort forever with only my keyboard to keep me warm. And so, to market, to market.

    (Hint: If you do enjoy every aspect of your work, keep it to your own damn self, weirdo!)


    3. About Shiny Keys Syndrome
    Working on the Fear-Death Experiences Series, I got back in touch with an edict I’d almost forgotten: Commit to one path and don’t be too precious about getting the words down.

    It is so easy to suffer Shiny Keys Syndrome. Ideas are cheap, but it’s the execution that takes so much time. I do not use generative AI, and I’m not a great typist, so I go slow.
    Along that long road, it’s easy to get distracted by the latest brilliant epiphany for a different book. I often wake up with inspiration in the morning or the middle of the night. Instead of looking away from my work in progress and listening to the siren song of those jangly keys, I stay the path, hold the line, and keep working on the book I’m already writing. So many ideas, so little time! If only I were immortal, or at least nigh-immortal.

    To ensure that I don’t wander off like a toddler at the fair, I’m keeping better track now. Each day I record what I accomplished and what I plan to do tomorrow. All in shorthand, my notebook is part diary, part tracker, and all encouragement to keep my energy up and the momentum moving forward. Being a novelist is fun, but at its core this is still work. It’s a job, and jobs require attention, purpose, focus, and showing up consistently.

    Final thoughts

    Track your progress, because that which is not measured is not improved.
    Show up.
    Keep going. Maintain momentum.
    Do what you have to do, even the stuff that’s not comfortable.
    Peace and prosperity may be your aim, but getting there won’t be without speed bumps.
    Too much comfort is a trap.
    Explore options and don’t be intimidated by what you are comfortable with. For instance, running ads can be confounding, but confidence doesn’t come before the task. Confidence follows the work.


    Vengeance Is Hers and Endemic are available on Amazon and these fine stores:

~ Have we met? I’m Robert Chazz Chute, blanket fort dweller, achy-ass cyclist, erstwhile Nova Scotian, graduate of journalism school and the Banff Publishing Workshop. Fifteen-time writing award winner, I’m also a raging hypochondriac who rages against the night. I pen apocalyptic epics with heart and suspenseful thrillers with brains and muscle. Since writing the Fear-Death Experiences series, I’ve become a huge fan of Cane Corsos like this guy:

Cane Corso dog.
Stefano, the helpful Cane Corso doggie.


I wasnโ€™t babbling. I am musing pensively.

The cover of Where The Night Takes Us
Where the Night Takes Us is coming this fall.

While my editor, Gari Strawn, works on the final edit of Where the Night Takes Us, I am working on the second draft of the sequel, When the Night Takes Us, a psychological thriller.

Forensic psychiatrist Simon Fethullah used to work with the FBI. Retired, he’s tracking down the cold case of a missing girl in Texas. He owns a huge RV, but due to his medical condition, he’s had to hire a driver. The driver’s name is Paloma.

Here’s a little excerpt:

I sighed and reviewed the pictures Willy had posted. โ€œI want to believe sheโ€™s not down in the dark. The City of the Dead swallows the lost and waits for us all.โ€ย 

Paloma shot me a quizzical look. โ€œIโ€™ve been to the City of the Dead. Took a tour while on leave once.โ€

My head came up as if I were awakening from a dream. โ€œHuh?โ€

โ€œThe City of the Dead is Cairo,โ€ Paloma said. โ€œYou know, Egypt! What are you babbling about?โ€

โ€œI wasnโ€™t babbling. I am musing pensively. And no, I donโ€™t think Willy had the resources to make it to Egypt. Sorry. My inner monologue leaked into my outer monologue.โ€

โ€œWell, rein that shit in, boss. You sound crazy.โ€

Itโ€™s more than merely sounding crazy, I thought.

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